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other page , cost me more than others. The distribution of the panels, bullet, (i dunno, the name in english) XD what you do think?

PD: thank you all for comment and criticism ^ ^, thanks.

CRISTIANO

otra pagina mas , sta me costo mas k als otras jeje. La distribucion de las viñetas k os parece? la primera y tercera nesecitan lineas cineticas?

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PD: gracias a todos por comentar, y por las criticas ^^, se agradece.